here I will be posting my reflective Essay
reflective letter
DEAR PROFESSOR
As I sit in class and write this letter to you, I find myself thinking about what to write. My first day of class I feel like I could fit this class as you were saying we will fun in this English composition we will write about everyday events in our life. After missing three class sessions, Things turn the opposite side not as I thought the first day. First was setting up my website. This was at my absence when you showed my classmates. I struggled a lot getting the website sets up even though you helped me couples times. I started posting some assignments. You advised me to read to read my classmates’ post blog that might give me an idea of what you been doing and I think, that helped me progress in my post blog. One thing I realized, it was last week October 16th that one of students came up with that problem that she tried to post a blog assignment and is not there. That happened to me three times I think after I finish writing my assignment and post it I realized that is not there and I did not know that is weebly problem and I was afraid to say that in class until that student notified you. So now I write my assignment on word and then I copy and paste on post blog.
Creative Nonfiction Essay: I did not know what to write about. First, to write about my arrival in America which I thought that would be the good one because it was all about me arriving to a big country without knowing the language of the country but is not after I showed you my paper. There are two things wrong with the essay. First, I did not read well the sheet assignment. You asked to write about something within the past month but I went way back to 2011. Second, showing scene and telling this is one of my biggest problem. I spend time telling story in my writing I do not know how to develop a showing scene. The day we supposed to have a workshop and we were not ready that helped me a lot. When I came home that day I called a friend the only friend that I have is an old lady that I met in church and she helped me a lot improving my English. She was the one that helped me write my creative nonfiction essay. First we looked up for an example about showing scene to help me understand before we started writing. She calls me every day after work to ask how was my day and what did I do at work today and I told her what happened that day. so she said how about writing about your supervising day? So we started there. It was like an interview she asked me questions and I answered them that were how I write my essay. I went to see council center to explain my struggle with this class and she advised me to write my essay in French and try to translate into and go see people in common learning center and that is what I did with my first assignment but I think from now on I will try this to see. I hope my letter make sense and hope to see soon face to face. Jeannette diannodji
Best regard
As I sit in class and write this letter to you, I find myself thinking about what to write. My first day of class I feel like I could fit this class as you were saying we will fun in this English composition we will write about everyday events in our life. After missing three class sessions, Things turn the opposite side not as I thought the first day. First was setting up my website. This was at my absence when you showed my classmates. I struggled a lot getting the website sets up even though you helped me couples times. I started posting some assignments. You advised me to read to read my classmates’ post blog that might give me an idea of what you been doing and I think, that helped me progress in my post blog. One thing I realized, it was last week October 16th that one of students came up with that problem that she tried to post a blog assignment and is not there. That happened to me three times I think after I finish writing my assignment and post it I realized that is not there and I did not know that is weebly problem and I was afraid to say that in class until that student notified you. So now I write my assignment on word and then I copy and paste on post blog.
Creative Nonfiction Essay: I did not know what to write about. First, to write about my arrival in America which I thought that would be the good one because it was all about me arriving to a big country without knowing the language of the country but is not after I showed you my paper. There are two things wrong with the essay. First, I did not read well the sheet assignment. You asked to write about something within the past month but I went way back to 2011. Second, showing scene and telling this is one of my biggest problem. I spend time telling story in my writing I do not know how to develop a showing scene. The day we supposed to have a workshop and we were not ready that helped me a lot. When I came home that day I called a friend the only friend that I have is an old lady that I met in church and she helped me a lot improving my English. She was the one that helped me write my creative nonfiction essay. First we looked up for an example about showing scene to help me understand before we started writing. She calls me every day after work to ask how was my day and what did I do at work today and I told her what happened that day. so she said how about writing about your supervising day? So we started there. It was like an interview she asked me questions and I answered them that were how I write my essay. I went to see council center to explain my struggle with this class and she advised me to write my essay in French and try to translate into and go see people in common learning center and that is what I did with my first assignment but I think from now on I will try this to see. I hope my letter make sense and hope to see soon face to face. Jeannette diannodji
Best regard
REFLECTIVE LETTER (revised)
DEAR PROFESSOR
As I sit in class and write this letter to you, I find myself thinking about what to write. My first day of class I feel like I could fit this class as you were saying we will have fun in this English composition we will write about everyday events in our life. After missing three class sessions, Things turn the opposite side not as I thought the first day. First was setting up my website. This was at my absence when you showed my classmates. I struggled a lot getting the website sets up even though you helped me couples of times. I started posting some assignments. You advised me to read my classmates’ post blog that might give me an idea of what you been doing and I think, that helped me progress in my post blog. One thing I realized, it was last week October 16th that one of the students came up with the problem that she tried to post a assignment on the blog and is not there and That happened to me three times I think after I finish writing my assignment and post it I realized that is not there and I did not know that is weebly problem and I was afraid to say that in class until that student notified you. So now I write my assignment on word and then I copy and paste on post blog.
Creative Nonfiction Essay: I did not know what to write about. First, to write about my arrival in America which I thought that would be the good one because it was all about me arriving to a big country without knowing the language of the country but is not after I showed you my paper. There are two things wrong with that essay. First, I did not read well the assignment sheet. You asked to write about something within the past month but I went way back to 2011. Second, showing scene and telling scene, are my biggest problem. I spend time telling story in my writing instead of developing the showing scene. The day we supposed to have a workshop and we were not ready that helped me a lot. When I came home that day I called my friend Renee. Renee is an old lady that I met in church and she helped me a lot improving my English. She was the one that helped me write my creative nonfiction essay. First we looked up for an example about showing scene to help me understand before we started writing. She calls me every day after work to ask how was my day and what did I do at work today and I told her what happened that day. so she said how about writing about your supervising day? So we started there. It was like an interview she asked me questions and I would answer them that is how I write my essay. I went to see council center to explain my struggle with this class and she advised me to write my essay in French and try to translate into English and then go see the people in common learning center and that is what I did with my first assignment but I think from now on I will try this to see. I hope my letter make sense and hope to see you and see how I stand this course, English Composition 1. Jeannette diannodji
Best regard
DEAR PROFESSOR
As I sit in class and write this letter to you, I find myself thinking about what to write. My first day of class I feel like I could fit this class as you were saying we will have fun in this English composition we will write about everyday events in our life. After missing three class sessions, Things turn the opposite side not as I thought the first day. First was setting up my website. This was at my absence when you showed my classmates. I struggled a lot getting the website sets up even though you helped me couples of times. I started posting some assignments. You advised me to read my classmates’ post blog that might give me an idea of what you been doing and I think, that helped me progress in my post blog. One thing I realized, it was last week October 16th that one of the students came up with the problem that she tried to post a assignment on the blog and is not there and That happened to me three times I think after I finish writing my assignment and post it I realized that is not there and I did not know that is weebly problem and I was afraid to say that in class until that student notified you. So now I write my assignment on word and then I copy and paste on post blog.
Creative Nonfiction Essay: I did not know what to write about. First, to write about my arrival in America which I thought that would be the good one because it was all about me arriving to a big country without knowing the language of the country but is not after I showed you my paper. There are two things wrong with that essay. First, I did not read well the assignment sheet. You asked to write about something within the past month but I went way back to 2011. Second, showing scene and telling scene, are my biggest problem. I spend time telling story in my writing instead of developing the showing scene. The day we supposed to have a workshop and we were not ready that helped me a lot. When I came home that day I called my friend Renee. Renee is an old lady that I met in church and she helped me a lot improving my English. She was the one that helped me write my creative nonfiction essay. First we looked up for an example about showing scene to help me understand before we started writing. She calls me every day after work to ask how was my day and what did I do at work today and I told her what happened that day. so she said how about writing about your supervising day? So we started there. It was like an interview she asked me questions and I would answer them that is how I write my essay. I went to see council center to explain my struggle with this class and she advised me to write my essay in French and try to translate into English and then go see the people in common learning center and that is what I did with my first assignment but I think from now on I will try this to see. I hope my letter make sense and hope to see you and see how I stand this course, English Composition 1. Jeannette diannodji
Best regard